State that the company (barely) described will be better than the major competitors faced.

I suggest you take a look at the template I provided, since it appears you have not yet done that.  You lack any analysis in this; you just continue to state that the company (barely) described will be better than the major competitors faced.  You cannot seem to even decide if you are going to sell to companies or individuals.  As noted in the instructions, any financials must be in Excel.

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