Research widely considering this is a master level assignment?

i have the work 90% ready and i show it to the doctor and he give me this feedback:
1- Narrative: no enough critical analysis
2-Referencing : have you research widely considering this is a master level assignment?
3- Ensure you answer the question.
4-perhaps dinde structure into industry specific terms & explain how much HASAWA protected employees in this section

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